Re: Morning Haiku
I'm sorry, but on my dim computer screen, I cannot read your embedded piece. Would it be possible for you to post it separately... at least if you'd like critique? sLightly disappointed I cannot see,...
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So sorry about that Daniel Sweet breath of morning beaded dew drenched lawn a new beginning
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maggie.. thanks for the double post.. my old eyes too had trouble with the original post. the sencond posting helped. nicely written, though technically the second line should have more separtion from...
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Thank you RG so many don't bother about tradition now but of course you are right Each line should stand alone As you can see I have rectified it. Maggie
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maggie this is just wonderful! the image and the words together give the reader such a calm sensation at dawn. it's just beautiful. lorrha
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it is just lovely... and i liked it on the artwork as well.. good job !!
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